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Sanderson Step Sisters Comic iss2 pg12 by okayokayokok Sanderson Step Sisters Comic iss2 pg12 by okayokayokok
Tomorrow night Sanderson Step Sisters Issue #2 "Beneath the Dinner Table" goes up for sale here on my DA homepage! I've put a lot of work into it to make sure it's even better than the first issue, but I want to hear what you think...so I'm asking for a critique, and this is the page I've chosen. (yes, the real page is in color and I will probably update to color version after the next issue's release next month) You can include comments on issue 1 and the rest of issue 2.

'Issue 2' introduces 3 more characters and includes Boob exp, body exp, blueBErry, weight gain, wetting, and some minor animal tf. The issue also sets up more story for issue 3 which will come around mid July.

Issue 2 Release Date: WED 5/30/2012 (11:00 pm eastern)
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:icondarkdonny:
I have to say I am very impressed with the work you are doing on the Step Sisters comic. I instantly bought the first issue as soon as I saw it was available, and didn't regret it for a second. The art is top notch, as usual, the colors were vibrant and fitting for the story, and the script was tight, and introduced the characters in memorable ways. I also liked how you worked in stories from before the comic, such as the talking fat guinea pig who was once a girl. Having that detail lets us know that our main character is not as accomplished as she'd like to portray herself, and is used as both a character note and a threat to her two sisters that they could end up that way if they aren't careful.

I am looking forward to issue two a lot, and I can see this will be a fun summer indeed with an issue coming out each month (if that is your plan.) The cover art for this issue coming up got me extremely excited because of how playful it is. The blueberry seems to be having fun in it, which is an aspect of transformation fiction I love, when people have some fun with their changes, even if they aren't 100% desired. Also this piece of art intrigues me because it's a new character, and a new kind of change. I am on the edge of my seat, my friend.

Keep up the wonderful work.
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andynortonuk Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
You layout in sequencing this piece is excellent. It is very easy to read what is going on from one panel to another.
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:iconmaxgrowth:
just realize my earlier post wasn't really a critique...your biggest strengths are your use of angles and realistic fantasy anatomy.
anatomy is hard in expansion and you extrapolate all the various components with skill. little details like extra extension on the boobs, or an exaggerated (but not overdone) roundness of a growing body. very nice work.
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:iconokayokayokok:
Thanks for the praise! The fun part about expansion art is being able to make it look as real as possible while keeping it as drawn art. I'd like to try doing an extremely expanded, extremely realistic drawing no black lines or anything to try something different. I would need a willing model to pose and a few extra hours to spend on it, but I think it would be cool. I took a quick look at your profile, do you do video clips?
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:iconmaxgrowth:
yep! we produce content for Taylor Made Clips, which has so far been limited to BE, Hourglass, and ass growth. Although, I have a wish list of stuff I'd like to eventually film.
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:iconmaxgrowth:
always looking forward to BE, weight gain and blueberry! can't wait to see the comic!
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:icondarkdonny:
The next 24 hours will move very slow, I can tell. :)
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:icondarkdonny:
Oh, I mis-read the date. YAYYYYY
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:iconkillx:
awesome I can't wait =)
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:iconbloat-her-up:
So this is what I'm missing out on. CRAP!
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perpetualmotionman May 29, 2012  Student Writer
Amazing, simply amazing. And hot
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