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Tomorrow night Sanderson Step Sisters Issue #2 "Beneath the Dinner Table" goes up for sale here on my DA homepage! I've put a lot of work into it to make sure it's even better than the first issue, but I want to hear what you think...so I'm asking for a critique, and this is the page I've chosen. (yes, the real page is in color and I will probably update to color version after the next issue's release next month) You can include comments on issue 1 and the rest of issue 2.
'Issue 2' introduces 3 more characters and includes Boob exp, body exp, blueBErry, weight gain, wetting, and some minor animal tf. The issue also sets up more story for issue 3 which will come around mid July.
Issue 2 Release Date: WED 5/30/2012 (11:00 pm eastern)
'Issue 2' introduces 3 more characters and includes Boob exp, body exp, blueBErry, weight gain, wetting, and some minor animal tf. The issue also sets up more story for issue 3 which will come around mid July.
Issue 2 Release Date: WED 5/30/2012 (11:00 pm eastern)
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Overall Vision Originality Technique ImpactI have to say I am very impressed with the work you are doing on the Step Sisters comic. I instantly bought the first issue as soon as I saw it was available, and didn't regret it for a second. The art is top notch, as usual, the colors were vibrant and fitting for the story, and the script was tight, and introduced the characters in memorable ways. I also liked how you worked in stories from before the comic, such as the talking fat guinea pig who was once a girl. Having that detail lets us know that our main character is not as accomplished as she'd like to portray herself, and is used as both a character note and a threat to her two sisters that they could end up that way if they aren't careful.
I am looking forward to issue two a lot, and I can see this will be a fun summer indeed with an issue coming out each month (if that is your plan.) The cover art for this issue coming up got me extremely excited because of how playful it is. The blueberry seems to be having fun in it, which is an aspect of transformation fiction I love, when people have some fun with their changes, even if they aren't 100% desired. Also this piece of art intrigues me because it's a new character, and a new kind of change. I am on the edge of my seat, my friend.
Keep up the wonderful work.