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Payback is a Witch pg3 by okayokayokok Payback is a Witch pg3 by okayokayokok
Page 3 of 3 (the end) of a comic commission I did for :iconbprofessional:

Page 1: fav.me/db2isu2

Page 2: fav.me/db2m1e8

Another (Wonka) Pregnancy comic: fav.me/daj6533
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:iconpunky0515:
punky0515 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2017
Excellent
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:iconharlowkb:
harlowkb Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2017
Do you have comics in this style?  (Payback, Race Day, and A Genie's Day Off) I thought all of them were great but could have been longer.
 
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:iconokayokayokok:
okayokayokok Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2017
I keep my commissioned comics limited to 2-4 pages, but the comics I sell are longer. Tales from the Crib Keeper series seems the most like these comics, some of the stories in them are short and some are longer, each story can be anywhere from 3-10 pages and each issue can have 2-4 stories. You can see what each issue has in it in its description and cover page.
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:iconnova225:
Nova225 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2017
When you think about it, this is absolutely horrible to the babies to be born. I mean, the 'victims' did say they weren't ready to take care of babies, so... either the children will suffer from bad parenting or they will be randomly thrown somewhere for adoption.

Yeah... That kind of 'absolute evil witch' stuff is fine at the surface, but barely scratch it and it's rather terrible under.
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:iconmatgao:
matgao Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2017
How many kids are in the Hispanic girl?
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:iconredthousand:
RedThousand Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
While I am loving the outcome it does seem a little unfair. It's just me personally, ever since beauty and the beast I have never liked the character of the judgmental enchantress,

It's not my commission though so you do you.
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:iconbprofessional:
Bprofessional Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2017
Sorry, if it upsets you. I'll try to make the victims of the next commission more deserving of such a punishment.
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:iconredthousand:
RedThousand Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Its just my perspective I'd thought I'd share. Its more about the logic that goes through a magic user's head. You have the ability to transmogrify people and you spend it demonstrating a point that obviously does not apply to you if you had used the same powers for self interest. 

The way I'd write it, the sorceress would say they were "trying to be more down to earth" and doesn't defend her position alone (that can easily be nullified with magic) but the position of people that are powerless in their position. Then the teens challenge her power as teens are won't to challenge authority and then fetishy hijinks insue. And then the preggifying magic would backfire according, making the nursing mom more pregnant and she realizing its kind of overkill.

But that's just me. I'd do the commission to the letter if I was asked. 
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:icondarthmcleod:
DarthMcLeod Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2017  Student
I noticed that neither girl ever attempted to apologize for their behavior...
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:iconmarissacrystal:
MarissaCrystal Featured By Owner May 27, 2017
Yeah, but their behavior actually wasn't bad, and for most places, breast feeding in public is seen as inappropriate (like letting it just hang out like that) besides to make teenagers into single mothers after they shared their valid and honest thoughts (albeit they didn't HAVE to, but this is litterally just teenagers being teenagers, nothing evil about it) that weren't that insulting, is unfair to them and unfair to the new children. What the sorceress did to them is way worse than what miniscule insult the girls did to her.
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:icondarthmcleod:
DarthMcLeod Featured By Owner May 27, 2017  Student
The two girls weren't calling the witch out on inappropriate behavior, they were simply being rude.  I found them totally unsympathetic, which I think was intentional.

It's a whole 'nother argument that the punishment outweighed the offense.  I'm inclined to agree that she went overboard. The punishment in real-world terms would be extremely harsh.

I prefer to think that despite what the witch said, the girls have had realistic-seeming false-pregnancies inflicted on them.  They might have to go through a simulated birth and certainly will have some months ahead at the gym to lose the  weight they have gained, but they aren't actually saddled with babies.  The artist's other work doesn't really support this view but I'm allowed my own headcanon.

I also prefer to think that if either girl had actually apologized for their earlier rude behavior the witch would have spared them.
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:iconmarissacrystal:
MarissaCrystal Featured By Owner May 28, 2017
Thats fair yeah. If they were actually laden with Babies, which wouldn't surprise me. These girl's lives are practically skrewed.
Yeah, what they said was pretty rude, upon rereading the first page, but it didn't surfice as a punishment to essentially make them poor single mothers with no one to turn to and no possible way to support it on their own. (plus a possible decreases life span of they were aged as well, no education possibilities if they planned on it either) ((not to mention the witch clearly tried to egg them on. When they first said it was gross, the witch was on the right breast while covering the left one. Yet after they said something, she purposefully switch breasts and just let the right one fall totally exposed.))

I wonder if an apology would have been enough. I doubt it would have done much though. "Should have thought of that before"
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:icondarthmcleod:
DarthMcLeod Featured By Owner May 28, 2017  Student
Certainly any serious decrease in pregnancy would fail the comic's fetish goals. I personally prefer my fetish served cruelty-free, so I choose to read what I want into what gray area I find. :)

I don't remember the girls reacting to anything the witch says or does until they begin transforming so I'm not sure she egged them on. Switching the baby without covering up could have been a raised middle finger to the girls, however.
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:iconojoutsuki:
OjouTsuki Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2017
People can be pretty shitty.
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:icondarthmcleod:
DarthMcLeod Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2017  Student
Makes it easier to have no sympathy for them.
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:iconsilentpassionoflove1:
Your comics are awesome I look forward to seeing more of your talented work
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:icondrpreggo:
DrPreggo Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Oh man, your comics are SO awesome! Thank you so much!
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:iconsoapdesu54321:
soapdesu54321 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2017
Nice stuff
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:iconjimmyinwhite:
jimmyinwhite Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
I would who's the father will be? 
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:iconwiseman288:
Wiseman288 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017
A perfect end to a perfect outing. Thaks a million Ok.
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:iconokayokayokok:
okayokayokok Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017
seeya at the next livestream!
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:iconwiseman288:
Wiseman288 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017
I'll be there
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:iconwanderer0426:
Wanderer0426 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017
This is too perfect XD
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:iconscottlandmanusa:
scottlandmanusa Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017
This was the best! Their pregnant bellies look so beautiful!
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:iconreaperkaitomon:
reaperkaitomon Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017
Let the pushing and screaming begin
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:iconmatgao:
matgao Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017
Did their whole Lives change?
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:iconbprofessional:
Bprofessional Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017
Oh, yeah!
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:iconmatgao:
matgao Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017
So they have husbands at home? I doubt either work.
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:icongutted1:
gutted1 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2017
its a latino and a black girl ain't no husband bro
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:iconbprofessional:
Bprofessional Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2017
That's a little too much.
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:iconmatgao:
matgao Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2017
Racist much?
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:icongutted1:
gutted1 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2017
it was a joke get a sense of humor
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:iconnova225:
Nova225 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2017
Get a sense of reality and perspective, then ?
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:iconbprofessional:
Bprofessional Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017
I'll try to explain what happens to the Witch's victims in another commission
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:iconmatgao:
matgao Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2017
That would be amazing :)
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:icongluttonwolf:
GluttonWolf Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017  Professional Traditional Artist
I like how even the baby is giving a smug look.
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:icondiaperedandlovingit:
DiaperedandLovingIt Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017
Ut oh 
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:iconknowall713:
knowall713 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017
I luv your preggy art :D
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:iconmunchie34:
munchie34 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017
I NEED MORE!!
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:iconleslyer:
LeslyeR Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017  Student Artisan Crafter
kkkkk
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:iconpjtoon75:
PJToon75 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nice plot twist, good story!
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:iconebenezerslime:
ebenezerslime Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
I like to think the baby is an accomplice.
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:iconokayokayokok:
okayokayokok Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017
either that or yesterday's victim who's enjoying the sight of someone else getting transformed
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:iconebenezerslime:
ebenezerslime Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
You make it sound like this lady just sits around waiting to fuck with people.
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:iconbprofessional:
Bprofessional Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017
No. The baby is the Witch's real son.
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:iconalittletoo-rocky1986:
awesome
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:iconkyler91599:
kyler91599 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017
so did this change their age or are they still teenagers?
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:iconbprofessional:
Bprofessional Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017
Physically their in their mid-thirties, age-wise yes they are still 16
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:iconmithiach:
Mithiach Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2017
So she stole 20 years of their lives over a couple of rude comments?
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:iconbprofessional:
Bprofessional Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2017
And gave them the gift that keeps on giving, yeah!
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